Stronk its good to see you back still loving the story overall but I had a bit of a question I finished 0.9 and wanted to use the gallery it has me put in my name as it does but it crashes after clicking on a person whose gallery I wanted to view doesn't matter the person just crash any ideas on how to fix this?
No I have a tendency to when one of my favorite visual novels updates I will take the time and play from the beginning just so they way of there wasa change or if my memory was bad I can make sure it was a full experience. I usually only will play for about an hour or so a day but I think if I remember right I got it done in like 3 day total hoping to take a course and play my own hand at trying to make a story as captivating as Stonk
Man, I would love to make a deep review of the game like I always do after finishing but I got SO. GODDAMN. LOST.
First Elise turns into some random goddess then a bunch of characters in a completely different place show up while the normal group is talking. Did I break the game or do I lack the memelord skillz of Mr. Stronk to understand the end of the update? STRONK, STOP ADMIRING PUTIN'S SEXY CALVE ALREADY, I NEED YOU HERE.
I'm actually lost, man. The part with Elise wasn't THAT bad, just me not understanding who was the girl who possessed or where she came from, but the worst was these other characters on screen. The group was talking normally but they weren't the focus, so I was like "wtf? Did they change forms? Is this an alternate reality? Did something happen and I didn't see?" and then the bear dude shows up again to keep me confused.
I remember that scene since I played through the game again to see if anything changed (been playing since 0.5 or 6), and going for the "bad karma" choice probably ensures Minerva's full possession, I'd guess.
And man, I kind of noticed this thing of writing too fast, especially the scenes. Suddenly one of girls feels like boning, and of course we could blame everything about that on Lou but... yeah.
It's something I have to accept, even I feels like shit's going too fast and goddamit in 0.9 is probably the fastest with the kind of stuff it brings on the table god damn, fortunatly once that last major event passed, the setting of the story will allow me to take a deep breath and relax for a few updates with a slower pace.
Hey, found a bug in chapter 2 after training turning into Demon. No matter which option you take: Elise or Chumee, everytime Im on third slide of conversation with Chumee it took me back to talking with Elise, and when done both talk options are disabled. Can only chose Head back home
Quick question: If clicking a name in the gallery yields an error saying I am missing a lock.png file and other tech stuff I don't understand what can be done? Fresh download did not solve and I am very inexperienced with Renpy
After playing this game for a bit, I noticed just how quickly everything moves in this game. I've only just got to the second chapter of the game so I might be calling this too early, but I just felt like there was no breathing room at all, it was pretty much one thing after another after another, and I feel that's a good way to lose people quickly. Again, I dunno if this is a problem in future Chapters but that's my initial thoughts on it.
First, the developer keeps randomly, unnaturally inserting themselves into the game and it's very bizarre, particularly when he's interacting with one of the characters; It's just out of place and quite frankly uncomfortable. ((I'm not talking about when Stronk shows up at the end talking about the next update, whatever-- that's fine-- I'm talking about when the characters are gathered, supposed to be a serious moment, then Stronk suddenly appears at the table and is talking to Lou.)) I feel like at any moment I'm going to be in an H-scene, look up, and Stronk is just watching. Or joined in.
And second, the plot while mostly good, occasionally feels like some fanfiction especially with (but not exclusive to) how the developer keeps self-inserting.
The only other problems I really have with the game are spelling/grammar related or background texture related but neither of those are really a big deal. Game is Ver. 0.8, it's whatever.
Despite these points, I do like everything else. As stated, the plot is good for the most part, characters looks lovely, animations look more than lovely-- hope to see more. Submitting this as a comment rather than a review 'cause the games not finished yet.
The feedback is appreciated I'm glad that you managed to enjoy the game despite those points.
I mostly add myself as a character in a humoristic kind of way it seems out of place and it's meant to be, having me appear out of nowhere to usually break the 4th wall for a bit.
I can safely say that no you'll never have an interaction with my model in an H scene lmao that would be a bit too much, nor when it's too serious scenes need to keep a bit of a serious momentum sometimes and I can't always bring my model.
I can see why it would feel like a fanfiction, but my model isn't a part of the story it's just a funny way for me to interact and add some random stuff to make people laugh or smile.
The story is basically a mess out of all the great fantasy universes I experiened so I hope that despite all of that you'll manage to still have fun and enjor your time !
Stronk: "I mostly add myself as a character ... to usually break the 4th wall ..."
I'd recommend that the timing be a bit more considered for these 4th wall breaks; You know, it's cute when a 4th wall self-insert happens initially, but it quickly gets to be annoying with quantity especially if it happens in the middle of a scene. Because the joke behind it is, "look, I put myself in the game," which feels like the same joke being repeatedly used and at that point, you might as well make a Stronk route. You can do whatever you want because it's your game, I just hope that you'll consider spacing it out and maybe even isolating it to in-between chapter gags so that there's no jarring pace changes in the actual story.
Stronk: "I can safely say that no you'll never have an interaction with my model in an H scene ..."
Hey Stronk, i was thinking, you with your fast replies gave me inspiration to do something that i think no one have already done before, that is to interview Small NSFW game creators on a call and make a video off of that to Youtube, yet i can't quite say it would work, but i think it is something that could help both sides. What do you think? I am willing to try It.
Hey Stronk, just to annoy you a little, hehe, when are you planning or think the next update will be available? Also, love this VN, keep up the good work.
Just finished the latest update; I'm going through withdrawal due to enjoying the story, characters, and overall depth of choices. Random question, but what would you imagine as the most fitting name for the MC? I usually use the default name, but if there isn't one, I would name him John because I just imagine MC's with harems having the name John.
Now I can't really answer that question, as the MC as indeed a canon name that will be revealed later, that said, that "canon" name, is no longer his own.
The MC is actually a manifestation of every player, So I assume he would have your name for your playthrough as an instance
So, I've seen this game SO many times here and I finally decided to try it. Gota say that I love the story, and the artwork/graphic isn't that bad ether. I honestly didn't expect to like this game, but I was proved to be wrong. I just started on chapter 2 and I really hope it's as good as the first one
I have to ask something. I just encountered a message saying "Coming up in version 0.7" And I've always hated when series revieals what will hapen in the next episode, so I have to ask is this the same? Or can I continue reading without being afraid of spoilers?
Hey, great game you got here so far, it has a very intriguing story line and each character has there own personality, as well as there own demons to face. Smut scenes are epic too.
But being the absolute nerd that I am... are we going to learn more about the first contact between the races and humanity? The war is fake and a lie created to fabricate everyone's minds, but is there going to be more progression about how the war was fought? A Magic vs Technology type thing? And also the reaction for humanity during the first contact, like how governments reacted and such?
I know that's a lot of questions and probably some very vague ones as well. I'm just really interested in the idea of it, it seems like the humans of the group know much about the world before 2020, just simple literature from books.
Either way, keep up the good work and I look forward to new updates!!
Hey ! Yes you will, it's something that will be explored a bit later in the 3rd chapter !
Thanks for the encouraging words, it's a bit hard to not spoil when the main thing is the story, while I'm slow on work, trust me I'm thinking a lot about the best way to bring all these ideas in !
Got it! I don't want you to spoil anything, I was just wondering and I'm thankful for your response. I'm just a massive history and world politics nerd, so that's just my curiosity speaking.
the story is a bit contrived, but I'm on board. One gripe though, how is it that all of these people are willing to date you and drop all of their lives after knowing you for like 4 days?
Also. as soon as I saw that Vanessa was from Scotland this just rang through my head
Hey Dev, Please note that there are some issues with the Re'npy's latest software update 7.4.2 as I got to know it from a wonderful developer who patiently helped me out with this issue. So, please if you are using Re'npy software to develop your game & planning to release your latest update, then please first downgrade your software to version 7.3.5 and then release it. Also note that if you are going to release the upgrades to your game using the new software and if an individual downloads & installs it, the game will not only not work but your old saved games won't work either. So before releasing it you need downgrade the software to version 7.3.5 and then release. I had to reset my phone and lose my saves from all the games that were installed in my phone just so that we could come up with this conclusion of mine. I wouldn't want any other patron or other players to go through the same process. I'd request you to explain this situation to the Re'npy developers team and get this sorted out.
Note: This is my experience purely based on Android phone with Android version 11. I cannot vouch for any other software or OS. Thank you for hearing me out.
You're welcome my friend..... And good, don't update it until you're sure.... I just don't wanna see the efforts & dedication you developers put into it go in vain and be a cause for demotivation.....
I just wanted to let you all know that this game is giving me isekai fever. I love the characters and the story is unique and intriguing. The dev has a lot of personality and I hope to keep seeing progress from him. I honestly feel in love with the game!
Hey just wanted to say love the game but I keep running into the bug where whenever I want to look at the gallery I get a white screen saying an error occurred and I can't look at the gallery. Is there anyway to fix this?
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It's a known bug that will soon be fixed !
Get in the discord, check the pins of the general channel you'll find a script.rpy
Just download it and put it in /game and replace !
I just want to say that the moment you said ''Damn right, we don't do NTR here, NTR is a sin'' my respect for you went from 100% to 1000%
is there any expansion of the female chest and rear area?
No, expansion isn't a planned fetish.
darn
Sorry man I hope you'll manage to find a game that contains it for you !
Hey dev, i was wondering can you list the game soundtrack in the game prefs..
Hey, I'll do that for 0.10 then
In the meantime if you have a specific one in mind I can probably guide you to it
It's a good thing my French teacher forced me to learn meters. Anyways good game bro.
Stronk its good to see you back still loving the story overall but I had a bit of a question I finished 0.9 and wanted to use the gallery it has me put in my name as it does but it crashes after clicking on a person whose gallery I wanted to view doesn't matter the person just crash any ideas on how to fix this?
That's weird lemme ask the person that helped me fix the gallery
If there are any error screen that appear can you post them here ?
Or on the discord
https://discord.gg/cMrRWHM6
Join the discord, you've got a scrypt.rpy pinned in the general, downlaod it and place it in /game, should fix it
Thanks you Handsome French fella 😉
Did you finish the game in one day?
No I have a tendency to when one of my favorite visual novels updates I will take the time and play from the beginning just so they way of there wasa change or if my memory was bad I can make sure it was a full experience. I usually only will play for about an hour or so a day but I think if I remember right I got it done in like 3 day total hoping to take a course and play my own hand at trying to make a story as captivating as Stonk
The Android link doesn't work, it always stops at around 1,7-1,6 GB... U said above, that u got another link... How can I get that?
I have to upload a new link , it'll take a few minutes I'll post it here once it's done
https://mega.nz/file/eYcRgQza#ZdFc2pq4tirm6A1UaIigZsqcwqRH_qYxWJheeqbcZlM
Try that one
Thanks! I'll tell you how I liked it
So, I just played your game and always got an error when a nsfw scene was entered and the Gallery didn't work too...
But I really liked the story, it was amazing! I'm really looking forward to the next Update and hope, that you can fix the things I mentioned before!
Yeah that issue can be fixed with the scrypt.rpy Pinned in the general channel of the discord !
Glad that you had a fun though !
no puedo descargar en mega queiro descargar por mediafre es que tengo el juego pero Vanessa tiene los pechos grande
You can find more download links on the f95 thread dedicated to Tales of Unity
One thing Ingot to say about this is...
Chumee best girl.
Man, I would love to make a deep review of the game like I always do after finishing but I got SO. GODDAMN. LOST.
First Elise turns into some random goddess then a bunch of characters in a completely different place show up while the normal group is talking. Did I break the game or do I lack the memelord skillz of Mr. Stronk to understand the end of the update? STRONK, STOP ADMIRING PUTIN'S SEXY CALVE ALREADY, I NEED YOU HERE.
Hai dw, next update is just as confusing lmfao
That said if you actually are lost I can re-explain some events, might help u clear some stuff !
I'm actually lost, man. The part with Elise wasn't THAT bad, just me not understanding who was the girl who possessed or where she came from, but the worst was these other characters on screen. The group was talking normally but they weren't the focus, so I was like "wtf? Did they change forms? Is this an alternate reality? Did something happen and I didn't see?" and then the bear dude shows up again to keep me confused.
What in the fresh hell happened?
During Elise's Emotional shock a few update ago, Minerva used this opportunity to possess her (She can possess people facing bad emotions)
Which led her to have her personnality altered which is why she started to be a bit more ruthless.
That said her cover was blown by Leonie's intervention, which led to Minerva having to give up Elise's body.
The scene was a bit eh, I do need to remake it !
Sometimes I write stuff a bit too fast.
I remember that scene since I played through the game again to see if anything changed (been playing since 0.5 or 6), and going for the "bad karma" choice probably ensures Minerva's full possession, I'd guess.
And man, I kind of noticed this thing of writing too fast, especially the scenes. Suddenly one of girls feels like boning, and of course we could blame everything about that on Lou but... yeah.
It's something I have to accept, even I feels like shit's going too fast and goddamit in 0.9 is probably the fastest with the kind of stuff it brings on the table god damn, fortunatly once that last major event passed, the setting of the story will allow me to take a deep breath and relax for a few updates with a slower pace.
Hey hey just wanted to ask. When can we expect the next update on itch?
Keep up the work hope ur work goes smooth
Should be around the 25th !
Might be the 26th on Itch though !
nice cant wait the game is way to good :)
Great work on this game I can't wait to see what the future brings.
hey just checking in! how are you doing? I hope your not burning yourself out!
Hey !
Doing just fine, update is coming along just fine too !
The 1st beta has been released for patrons, and I'm working towards the 2nd !
Hey, found a bug in chapter 2 after training turning into Demon. No matter which option you take: Elise or Chumee, everytime Im on third slide of conversation with Chumee it took me back to talking with Elise, and when done both talk options are disabled. Can only chose Head back home
Weird, which version of the game are you using ?
If it's the current one can you send me the sentence right before the bug ?
v0.8.1
Chumee: Haha, I guess so, it's just so relaxing y"know
Next slide Elise:
I still have to get used to the fact that I need to learn more about magic.
I don't remember what choices I had on Chumee before but I know I get into showers but.don't peek on her and I gave her time in Inn
Nice game, Stronk still is the MVP
Hey for some reason i am unable to download the game?
Hmm that's weird, do you have an error or something ?
same, nothing pops up when i click install
What device are you using ?
pc
Weird, it's working for me
Are you using the itch.io App? downloading off website should work. (the App install is not perfect at problem solving)
How is going the next update?
It's coming along slowly but surely, a first beta should be up soon for patrons !
Quick question: If clicking a name in the gallery yields an error saying I am missing a lock.png file and other tech stuff I don't understand what can be done? Fresh download did not solve and I am very inexperienced with Renpy
It's a bug known, don't worry It'll be fixed on the next patch !
Cool, great work so far! Favorite part so far would have to be the self insert bits, I'm a sucker for memes and meta jokes!
I can translate your game into Spanish, if you wish.
Sure go ahead, it's always good to have more languages available
After playing this game for a bit, I noticed just how quickly everything moves in this game. I've only just got to the second chapter of the game so I might be calling this too early, but I just felt like there was no breathing room at all, it was pretty much one thing after another after another, and I feel that's a good way to lose people quickly. Again, I dunno if this is a problem in future Chapters but that's my initial thoughts on it.
It's one of my major flaws, I tend to go a bit too fast, CH3 should feel slightly slower though due to the new setting
Two things
First, the developer keeps randomly, unnaturally inserting themselves into the game and it's very bizarre, particularly when he's interacting with one of the characters; It's just out of place and quite frankly uncomfortable. ((I'm not talking about when Stronk shows up at the end talking about the next update, whatever-- that's fine-- I'm talking about when the characters are gathered, supposed to be a serious moment, then Stronk suddenly appears at the table and is talking to Lou.)) I feel like at any moment I'm going to be in an H-scene, look up, and Stronk is just watching.
Or joined in.And second, the plot while mostly good, occasionally feels like some fanfiction especially with (but not exclusive to) how the developer keeps self-inserting.
The only other problems I really have with the game are spelling/grammar related or background texture related but neither of those are really a big deal. Game is Ver. 0.8, it's whatever.
Despite these points, I do like everything else. As stated, the plot is good for the most part, characters looks lovely, animations look more than lovely-- hope to see more. Submitting this as a comment rather than a review 'cause the games not finished yet.
The feedback is appreciated I'm glad that you managed to enjoy the game despite those points.
I mostly add myself as a character in a humoristic kind of way it seems out of place and it's meant to be, having me appear out of nowhere to usually break the 4th wall for a bit.
I can safely say that no you'll never have an interaction with my model in an H scene lmao that would be a bit too much, nor when it's too serious scenes need to keep a bit of a serious momentum sometimes and I can't always bring my model.
I can see why it would feel like a fanfiction, but my model isn't a part of the story it's just a funny way for me to interact and add some random stuff to make people laugh or smile.
The story is basically a mess out of all the great fantasy universes I experiened so I hope that despite all of that you'll manage to still have fun and enjor your time !
Stronk: "I mostly add myself as a character ... to usually break the 4th wall ..."
I'd recommend that the timing be a bit more considered for these 4th wall breaks; You know, it's cute when a 4th wall self-insert happens initially, but it quickly gets to be annoying with quantity especially if it happens in the middle of a scene. Because the joke behind it is, "look, I put myself in the game," which feels like the same joke being repeatedly used
and at that point, you might as well make a Stronk route. You can do whatever you want because it's your game, I just hope that you'll consider spacing it out and maybe even isolating it to in-between chapter gags so that there's no jarring pace changes in the actual story.Stronk: "I can safely say that no you'll never have an interaction with my model in an H scene ..."
damn
Fingers crossed for the next update coming soon.Hey Stronk, i was thinking, you with your fast replies gave me inspiration to do something that i think no one have already done before, that is to interview Small NSFW game creators on a call and make a video off of that to Youtube, yet i can't quite say it would work, but i think it is something that could help both sides. What do you think? I am willing to try It.
Sure I'm totally down, you can contact me on Discord for details.
Will do. Thanks for the support on the Idea. Add me there, DhAltmann#6471.
Btw, there is no valid link for your discord here.
Hey Stronk, just to annoy you a little, hehe, when are you planning or think the next update will be available? Also, love this VN, keep up the good work.
Depends on my freetime, fortunatly, by the end of the month !
wow, that's nice, i'll wait till then, thanks for the fast reply.
soooooo..Vanessa scottish accent dlc when???
I do remember someone in the discord changing the script to add just that for fun !
We all make mistakes in the heat of passion, Jimbo.
Just finished the game and just wanna say this
Vanessa is one scottish accent away from being the best girl
is there any guide/walkthrough on how to get each girls route?
I think there is on F95
That said starting Chapter 2, you can basically get every girl's route by just gathering harem points
Just finished the latest update; I'm going through withdrawal due to enjoying the story, characters, and overall depth of choices. Random question, but what would you imagine as the most fitting name for the MC? I usually use the default name, but if there isn't one, I would name him John because I just imagine MC's with harems having the name John.
Now I can't really answer that question, as the MC as indeed a canon name that will be revealed later, that said, that "canon" name, is no longer his own.
The MC is actually a manifestation of every player, So I assume he would have your name for your playthrough as an instance
Whats game engine
I'm using Ren'py for the code
And Koikatsu for the renders
So, I've seen this game SO many times here and I finally decided to try it. Gota say that I love the story, and the artwork/graphic isn't that bad ether. I honestly didn't expect to like this game, but I was proved to be wrong. I just started on chapter 2 and I really hope it's as good as the first one
I have to ask something. I just encountered a message saying "Coming up in version 0.7" And I've always hated when series revieals what will hapen in the next episode, so I have to ask is this the same? Or can I continue reading without being afraid of spoilers?
Those kind of teases, are MEANT to be seen they're not spoilers, but closer to "stuff that happens between updates"
So feel free to go ahead !
Ah, so it's so the player knows what happens meanwhile. Good to know, thx for a great game btw (and for quick answer) :D
"If the android version doesn't work for you, don't hesitate to ask me in DM for another link !"
How\Where do I DM\PM you.
Just in general.
I'll get you a Link in a bit !
https://mega.nz/file/TIkHlIrQ#QGuHyjN0V_j3cyj2Qq23N9HuKn1ut4AUqjbD3WSS3OQ
Try that one
There's no option to DM you there…
Oh, I DM'd you the link directly, but you can DM me on the discord !
And where can I find the link to the discord…?
In the game, on the menu you've got a discord icon just click it,
https://discord.gg/cNBry87S
Or click that one
Hey, great game you got here so far, it has a very intriguing story line and each character has there own personality, as well as there own demons to face. Smut scenes are epic too.
But being the absolute nerd that I am... are we going to learn more about the first contact between the races and humanity? The war is fake and a lie created to fabricate everyone's minds, but is there going to be more progression about how the war was fought? A Magic vs Technology type thing? And also the reaction for humanity during the first contact, like how governments reacted and such?
I know that's a lot of questions and probably some very vague ones as well. I'm just really interested in the idea of it, it seems like the humans of the group know much about the world before 2020, just simple literature from books.
Either way, keep up the good work and I look forward to new updates!!
Hey ! Yes you will, it's something that will be explored a bit later in the 3rd chapter !
Thanks for the encouraging words, it's a bit hard to not spoil when the main thing is the story, while I'm slow on work, trust me I'm thinking a lot about the best way to bring all these ideas in !
Got it! I don't want you to spoil anything, I was just wondering and I'm thankful for your response. I'm just a massive history and world politics nerd, so that's just my curiosity speaking.
Keep at it!
Spoilers lol
finally got to the inn.
training to control my demon side? am i gonna get a devil trigger? AM I IN DMC?
jokes aside, plot is a bit more streamlined after the start, and wayyy easier to follow, so props for that. looking foward to the rest of this
the story is a bit contrived, but I'm on board. One gripe though, how is it that all of these people are willing to date you and drop all of their lives after knowing you for like 4 days?
Also. as soon as I saw that Vanessa was from Scotland this just rang through my head
Bruh
Lmfao I kek'd so hard
Well, as "alright" as the story might be it's still an adult game, so sometimes I've got to make soem questionnable detours with the story.
That said The succubi part of the MC has a lot to do with it, but that will be explored soon enough !
Hey Dev,
Please note that there are some issues with the Re'npy's latest software update 7.4.2 as I got to know it from a wonderful developer who patiently helped me out with this issue. So, please if you are using Re'npy software to develop your game & planning to release your latest update, then please first downgrade your software to version 7.3.5 and then release it.
Also note that if you are going to release the upgrades to your game using the new software and if an individual downloads & installs it, the game will not only not work but your old saved games won't work either. So before releasing it you need downgrade the software to version 7.3.5 and then release.
I had to reset my phone and lose my saves from all the games that were installed in my phone just so that we could come up with this conclusion of mine. I wouldn't want any other patron or other players to go through the same process. I'd request you to explain this situation to the Re'npy developers team and get this sorted out.
Note: This is my experience purely based on Android phone with Android version 11. I cannot vouch for any other software or OS.
Thank you for hearing me out.
Hey !
Don't worry I'm still using 7.3.5 and I don't plan on changing just yet !
Thanks for the heads up friend !
You're welcome my friend..... And good, don't update it until you're sure.... I just don't wanna see the efforts & dedication you developers put into it go in vain and be a cause for demotivation.....
Hello, I just want to let you know that I really really enjoy reading your game.
Each character has its own unique attractiveness and personality.
The story is well thought out (and will hope to make it even better In the later updates.)
Thank you for giving us this wonderful game.
God bless and stay safe dude.
You deserve more patrons. Nice game.
I just wanted to let you all know that this game is giving me isekai fever. I love the characters and the story is unique and intriguing. The dev has a lot of personality and I hope to keep seeing progress from him. I honestly feel in love with the game!
Love this game! Really hoping for the other goblin sisters to join in as well!
Hey just wanted to say love the game but I keep running into the bug where whenever I want to look at the gallery I get a white screen saying an error occurred and I can't look at the gallery. Is there anyway to fix this?
It's a known bug, fortunatly the gallery is pm empty beyond what was already there for now, but it's fixed in the coming build !
thank you!
When will you release Version 0.9 Will it be in Portuguese?
Aiming for mid February.
I don't take care of the Translations to other languages !
So you would have to ask the translator yourself
Tnx for letting us know.